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INTRODUCING PURPOSES IN WRITING, AUTHENTICITY IN THE WRITING
PROCESS, AND GIVING FEEDBACK
Odilova Farangiz Gʻayratjon qizi
Faculty of English Language and Literature
Department of Foreign Language and Literature
Fergana State university
https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.14332957
Abstract:
This article explores the significance of purpose, authenticity, and feedback in
the writing process, emphasizing their interconnected roles in fostering genuine
communication. Writing with a clear purpose ensures direction, while authenticity allows
writers to express their unique voices. Feedback serves as a vital bridge between the writer's
intentions and the reader's understanding, enabling improvement and growth. Drawing
insights from philosophical and educational perspectives, this study highlights practical
applications of these principles in writing education.
Key Words:
writing purpose, authenticity, feedback, writing process, pedagogy.
Introduction
Writing is a versatile tool for human expression, whether to inform, persuade, or simply
reflect personal thoughts. In the writing process, understanding one’s purpose, remaining
authentic, and seeking constructive feedback are essential for creating meaningful and
impactful texts. My experience confirms that when I write with clear goals, my work resonates
more effectively with readers. This article integrates philosophical and pedagogical insights
from thinkers like Fromm, Taylor, and Trilling to provide a deeper understanding of these
elements.
Methods
The analysis combines theoretical perspectives with personal reflection. By referencing
existentialist philosophy (Fromm, 1942; Park, 2007), historical discourse (Saupe, 2016;
Trilling, 1974), and ethics of authenticity (Taylor, 1992), I connect abstract ideas to practical
strategies. My own experiences as a writer and educator are woven throughout to illustrate
how these principles apply in real-life contexts.
Results
1. Introducing Purposes in Writing
A clear purpose anchors the writing process. Without a defined objective, writing risks
becoming unfocused and disconnected. For example, in my own work, I’ve found that outlining
my purpose before starting a project helps me maintain consistency and engage my audience
more effectively. Charles Taylor (1992) asserts that alignment between personal values and
writing goals creates authenticity and meaning, a principle I strive to implement in every piece
I write.
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In teaching writing, I emphasize helping students articulate their intentions. Whether
they aim to inform or persuade, clarity of purpose empowers them to connect with readers and
meet their objectives. Achim Saupe’s (2016) research supports this, noting that purposeful
writing fosters deeper engagement both for the writer and the audience.
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1
Taylor, Charles (1992). The Ethics of Authenticity. Harvard University Press. ISBN 0-674-26863-6.1. № 1 (2023): FAN
JURNALI TA'LIM VA MADANIYAT
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Saupe, Achim (2016-12-04). "Authenticity". Docupedia-Zeitgeschichte. doi:10.14765/zzf.dok.2.645.v1.
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2. Authenticity in the Writing Process
Authenticity is the essence of effective writing. Drawing on Lionel Trilling’s (1974)
distinction between sincerity and authenticity, I believe writing becomes authentic when the
writer’s inner voice is expressed without undue external influence. Fromm (1942) similarly
underscores the importance of freedom from societal conformity, a sentiment I deeply resonate
with.
Authenticity involves embracing vulnerability and rejecting the temptation to mimic
others. When I’ve allowed myself to write honestly, the result has been more compelling, even
if imperfect. Authenticity also means allowing room for revision—acknowledging that our first
attempts may not fully convey our intentions but refining them until they do.
3. Giving Feedback
Feedback is an indispensable part of writing. However, I’ve noticed that the way feedback
is delivered makes a significant difference in its effectiveness. Constructive feedback that
highlights strengths while addressing weaknesses helps me see my work in a new light and
motivates me to improve. Park (2007) notes that feedback should not only critique but also
nurture the writer’s self-awareness and authenticity, a principle I wholeheartedly endorse.
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As a teacher, I strive to give feedback that is both specific and encouraging. For instance,
instead of simply pointing out grammatical errors, I guide students to understand how those
corrections improve clarity and alignment with their purpose. Feedback, when framed
positively, empowers writers to take ownership of their work rather than feeling discouraged
by criticism.
Discussion
Purpose, authenticity, and feedback are deeply interconnected elements of the writing
process. My own experiences align with Erich Fromm’s (1942) perspective that authentic
expression arises from the freedom to write without fear of judgment. Taylor’s (1992) idea of
authenticity as a social ethic resonates with my belief that writing should respect the audience’s
perspective while staying true to the writer’s voice.
Feedback, in particular, serves as a dynamic tool for growth. When I’ve received insightful
feedback, it has often revealed dimensions of my writing I hadn’t considered, ultimately making
my work stronger. This aligns with Park’s (2007) argument that feedback fosters not just
technical improvements but also personal development as a writer.
Conclusion
Writing is a multifaceted process where purpose provides direction, authenticity ensures
integrity, and feedback facilitates refinement. These principles are not only theoretical but also
deeply practical, as I’ve experienced in my own work and teaching. Educators must guide
students to define their goals, embrace their unique voices, and view feedback as an
opportunity for growth.
By fostering these elements, we create a culture of writing that is purposeful, authentic,
and continuously evolving—one where every writer, whether novice or experienced, can find
their voice and connect meaningfully with their audience.
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Park, James Leonard (2007). Becoming More Authentic: The Positive Side of Existentialism (5th ed.). Existential
Books. ISBN 978-0-89231-105-7.
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References:
1.
Fromm, Erich (1942). Escape from Freedom. Routledge & Kegan Paul. Wilmington, Del.:
Vernon Press. pp. 135-158.
2.
Park, James Leonard (2007). Becoming More Authentic: The Positive Side of
Existentialism (5th ed.). Existential Books. ISBN 978-0-89231-105-7.
3.
Saupe,
Achim
(2016-12-04).
"Authenticity".
Docupedia-Zeitgeschichte.
doi:10.14765/zzf.dok.2.645.v1.
4.
Taylor, Charles (1992). The Ethics of Authenticity. Harvard University Press. ISBN 0-674-
26863-6.1. № 1 (2023): FAN JURNALI TA'LIM VA MADANIYAT
5.
Trilling, Lionel (1974). Sincerity and Authenticity. Harvard University Press. ISBN 0-19-
281166-5.
